Hope you are doing well! Welcome to our sixth activity. Please, post your comments before October 14th, 8 p.m.!
1. Go to the web link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEukS2YN9B8 and watch the video (it was worked some classes ago).
- Introduction: it usually offers something that changes / affects / motivates the characters of the story to overcome a situation.
- Body: it usually reveals how the characters move toward overcoming the situation.
- Conclusion: it has to do with facing one difficult choice and decides one correct option while working out of the situation.
3. Write a paragraph for each one of the parts mentioned above, giving your own ideas to tell your version of the story. It must have 250 words at least.
4. Prepare an oral report about it to be presented in the tutorial sessions (from October 20th to 24th), you just will have 2 1/2 minutes and it is expected you to say 45 sentences at least.
- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide (The ones worked in last classes).
4. Language use / writing aspects:
- Simple sentence structures in the tenses you decide (The ones worked in last classes).
- Useful vocabulary you need to express your ideas.
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
TEARS IN THE FOREST
ReplyDeleteThere is a legend about King Zeus and the mysterious maiden. This day was one of those beautiful sunny days, perfect for going to the forest. Zeus looked for his friends, but Apolo and Adonis were traveling out of Greece, then Zeus decided to go alone. He took his bag and his bottle of wine and he went out.
When he arrived at the Olympus forest, the weather was cold. But he ran into the forest. He was very happy. He was sitting near to a tree having a cold cup of wine. Then, he saw a beautiful woman behind a tree, she observed him. She was afraid. However, he took her hand and he invited her to sit down with him. Meanwhile, he gave her a cup of wine as long as he observed her. She was a wonderful woman; she has black long hair, white skin, deep blue eyes and red lips. She was dressed with beautiful veils.
He spoke her but she did not speak. He takes her hand and together walked across the forest, as soon as, she smiled, he knew that he love her. He kissed her. Then, she told him her history; she was a sacred spirit of the forest and she could not love a human. For that reason, he cried while she hugged him.
The rain fell down in his face and he woke up, the forest was already got dark.
He looked for the lady. But, there was not any rake of her. He was desperate, because he did not believe this. He ran through the forest again. But, he did not found her; he could not already live without her. Finally, he knew that she had been only a dream. So, he prayed to the gods and they granted him to become Guadual tree, and he lived in this forest. Nevertheless, he continued dreaming eternally with the sacred maiden.
For that reason the Guaduals trees cries!
STEP BY STEP
ReplyDeleteStations of loneliness, repeated scenes of a life that happens again and again, the same story day after day looking for loving, ephemeral company. Step by step one beside the other walking a long way, each step she forced them up, it took them to the top floor, where she will separate them.
She is accompanied by silence of loneliness, the absurd idea of looking for company and being on the edge of her thoughts, she decided to drop the ties and take off one of her feet with the firm conviction of knowing that cold would not last long, by watching the shadow of a man she dropped her shoe, and throw it at the hard cement, the fall was a few seconds, the blow was hard, but it was not the first time it happened, it got used to falling and being raised by different hands, empty hands, hands that felt anything, hands that would lead it to its destination, the place where it should be, covering the right foot of its owner, hands eventually alienate.
What good is a shoe without its partner? How to see on sand two different footprints and not feel empty? If on the road they found the same stones, the same rain, the same tired, for that reason, her owner was wrong to use them as bait for loving; she did not understand that no matter how long you were barefoot because in the end to go in search of her soul mate, the same pair of shoes would accompany step by step.
MY "LIFE" WITHOUT MY SICKLE
ReplyDeleteWhen the pressure is so strong. that there is no way out of that routine of loneliness and twist of fate you are in the middle of that way. Shaking hands with the cold prospect of seeing death as a stalker can become your reality.
The death. desperate for love and meet someone decides to create a plan to kill someone to be with her for ever . she decides to throw a shoe at the empty when she sees a young man walking down the street. unfortunately the shoe achievement not kill the young.
The Young saves the death and invites her for coffee. she accepts.but she still is not satisfied. she decides to kiss him with her cold lips but young does not want. He is married and says no. He walks .then she decides to hang him by his back.but as she does not have his sickle can not. The young man was upset and angry and rejects her anew. she magically sends a car to get hit him. but the young man is more cunning and sees him.
He runs away. And the whimsical death runs for his refusal decides to steal him. the ridiculous death surprises young from his back and pushes him, but the death is nothing without his sickle. she has not powers or strength. for that reason the young can win the fight then he abandons her to her fate.
Finally she realizes that this is not the love of her death and returns to kill another lover future.
Psdta: You are nothing when you lack the reflection of a sharp sickle to your reality show ...
LOVE THROUGH A PAINTING
ReplyDeleteThere was once a young man named Philip, who besides being the son of a great magician, he was a great painter and he loved to paint all that was on the way. One day in his daily walks through the forest, he met a beautiful woman who was crying about a magic tree, at that moment Philip took his paintings and began to draw. The woman did not realize what he was doing. When he finished, he turned to her and showed her beautiful painting he had done. She was silent and dived into the arms of Felipe crying, hugged himself as he did not understand why the woman cried so inconsolably. The name of this woman was Anna, daughter of a powerful witch and she owned several colonies. Anna told Philip that she did not agree with some things to her mother and she felt very lonely since her mother treated her badly. Felipe was moved by her story and told her he would take her to his kingdom and would make a beautiful portrait of her. She was very happy and from that day she was completely in love with him. Days passed and they shared many things, then Felipe felt more than a relationship of friends, he was feeling something Ana and Philip proposed to her and give you a lifetime of happiness as she could never have.
THE STORM OF LOVE
ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, there was a young woman that she lived in Yucatán. He was eighteen years old, when his parents were dead. She named Nathalie, when his parents died she decided to commit suicide but in that moment she rises to the top of a building and then she thrown a shoe. In that moment a young man passed for the street. He named Anthony and he was twenty five years old.
He quickly ran towards her, when he arrived there she addressed him and then they embraced each. Later on, he goes out to the store and he invited to drink coffee but in this moment she love of Anthony. After, they decided to go to dance. Just after, they come back to their house but she just remembered that she did not have to go. Anthony decided to receive to Nathalie for this night; also, she wanted to follow her undergraduate program. Anthony wanted to continue his undergraduate program in modern languages. They decided to study modern languages together. The days passed and she ended love more of him.
A day in the linguistic class they do homework together and she wanted to become in his girlfriend. But when she talks with him. She knows that he was homosexual. When she knows of it, she decided to follow daily. On the other hand, he decided to go away because he did not want hurting. When she saw that he go away, she come back to the top of same building for she was determined to commit suicide again. But in that moment, a young man passed the street. But she thrown a shoe again then he quickly ran towards her. He named Alex. He studied modern languages and now he works in the university as teacher of English V. He was single, and she was sad because his first lover was homosexual. Then, she wanted to continue with his life but with someone to support her. Later of many moths, they got married and they were the happiest of the world.
Creative writing
ReplyDeleteThe Unexpected love
My story is about a girl named Lettie, who was a young girl that believed and gave all for the love of her life. she was a spoiled young girl by her parents, which one day felt in love with the gardener`s son called Petter. They went out some days until they felt in love with each other and thought in marring him, even though she didn’t knew all of him.
One day they went out to see the sea from a hill, but Lettie didn’t know that he had another girl, and the girl came to the hill that day. She was very angry because she saw that there was another girt there. So she slowly decided to get closer to him,to kick him in the back of one of his legs. So he felt down in to the bottom of the sea, where the sharks devour him until there was nothing left. She was in shock of seeing what had happened to her love. Nonetheless she decided to stay at that place for some time, until a tall, handsome man with red hair and big green eye walking by saw her and decided to ask why she was crying. So the men spoke to her for a while and encourage her to go with him to his place for her to have something to eat.
Later after arriving to his home she ate and took a shower, now that she hadn’t been able to take one for some day. The guy named John decided to let her stay at his place for as long as she wanted. Months later after they got to know each other really well, she saw that there was something that John had that reminded her of Petter. He treated her really nicely as Petter once did. As time went on the memories from Petter vanished, and she had decide to have a new love life with John. He became the love of her life from that time on.
The day of their wedding came and they were in front of the church. Lettie was very happy and anxious but when she looked back she saw a ghost from her past, it was Petter. As she looked at him her past came to mind and started to cry. She decided to run away from the church and all the people got really confused of what had happened. She ran and ran through the city streets as long as she could to forget what she had seen. It started to rain and she was wet and at that time she remembered the last time that she had expended with petter. She ended up going to the same hill where her first love had died to end her pain and not to suffer anymore. The sharks that one day had devoured Petter helped her to come to peace at once to be forever with her real love.
The fatal woman (Monos árticos)
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of fatal women all around the world. I am going to tell you the story of one of them. This is the story of Cassandra.
She is a woman that never has known what the love is. But, she always has dreamed to have a romantic story onto her life. Probably, she would have one but she has a mistake. A really big one. She falls in love so fast. As fast that it is scared.
All her boyfriends through her life have run out too afraid of Cassandra because she has been so… passionate in her relationships.
One day, she tired of her bad luck in the love she decided to make a kind of strategy to “capture” into her web the man that she wants. She passed all the days watching romantic comedies and something curiously happened. She was very interested in the bad girls’ behavior and their ways to handler the guys around them. But, something that she did not know was that she will take that to new extremes.
All those movies just made her sad. So sad and without hope Cassandra decided to kill herself. So, the next morning she climbed to the top of the nearest build to her. She was stand up on the corner of the build. Before to jump she thought that would be funny fell a shoe down to hit someone, so she did it. The shoe almost hit to a handsome man. His name is James. This guy realized that Cassandra will jump to the build so he ran as fast as he could to the top of the build. When he saw her on the corner he approached to her very slow and carefully.
When Cassandra saw to James worried for her she cannot jump. She only wanted huge him so strong. Cassandra though that this guy was the love of her life. After that, they went to a cafeteria. James tried to calm Cassandra down. Since that moment Cassandra’s mistake goes out. She instantly got a crush for him but James was not very interested. The principal reason is because he is married. Also, she did not care about it.
Since the moment that James left the cafeteria and told her that he was not interested in her she started to harass him. She followed him everywhere that he went. One month after his meeting with Cassandra. James tired of her, decided to face this situation. She was destroying all his relationships. She was obsessed.
He told her that he wished that he had never found her in the build. He broke her heart. Then, she ran away and she went to the build where everything began. She was decided to jump. But, Cassandra realized that she find the strategy that she had been looking for. So, she left fall her shoe down once again and the entire situation was repeated one more time.
This is the story of one fatal woman who wants to be love. And, if you want to follow the Cassandra’s steps at least you must buy attractive clothes, go to get a great hair style and dress you up. Probably, if you do it the plan would work. Cassandra was not very beautiful for that reason it does not work.
Déjà vu:
ReplyDeleteI stood there on the top with my head held high and a smile on my face. However, my spirit was down, my heart was hurt, my eyes didn't sparkled, but nobody noticed. I felt a heaviness, something stuck in my chest and I could not breathe well. I begged and begged for someone who cares about me. Waiting for a hug or a smile but nobody noticed. Until saw you and you came along, you reminded me someone I once loved. You say the things he said and you do the things as he did. You treat me like he used to. You have the same smile and the same look.
Soon I thought I was in love with you and I even saw him on you but the lights came on and I realized he was not you. You did not wanted laugh with me anymore or even didn't smiled or showed sympathy to my presence. I knew you wasn't him when I hugged you and then I felt like your arms kept me away from your body. I was full of demons and ghosts and so obsessed with his love that perhaps I was the one who took you away from me and now you walk away just like he did.
And what now? I’m lost, I’m blind and I don’t know where I am. I'm starting to run down the street, going up the stairs and I cannot stop feel as if I had done this already. I cannot stop feel like I have been here before. My heart is hurt, I felt a heaviness, something stuck in my chest and I could not breathe well. Until I saw you, you remind me someone I once loved.
Hey! Today I am going to explain you in the following lines a story about the Nina’s love. More than her story the love, is her own experience with the love.
ReplyDeleteWhere is my love? Thought Nina.
Nina is from Meta city in Colombia but she lives in England. She is single. She is thirty-four years old and she is Psychologist. I met her in Monteria, in a family reunion. She is an old friend of my mom. One day, Nina said me her story with the love and she said me…
“When I was a little girl, I dreamed of getting married and also, I dreamed having many sons. I never thought to be a Psychology. I only wanted marry. Even, my parents thought that soon I would marry or I would get pregnant. I was so obsessed with this.
When I was in the high school, I liked a boyfriend. Even, I lost a year in school for not thinking in my studies. Finally I had a boyfriend. I was very happy and I thought “He will be my husband”. Months passed and I saw him with another girl, and my story the love with him finished. When I started my studies in Psychol. I self-determined have a boyfriend and marry when I have finished my undergraduate program.
At the University I had many friends, but none wanted to be my boyfriend. I do not know the reasons. I despaired. And I did many things for having a boyfriend. Many people said me that I was crazy. Even, my ex best friend said me this too. The people did not understand me. I only wanted have a boyfriend.
When I finished my undergraduate program, I started to work. And, finally I found my “love”, my “ideal man” he is beautiful. We were seven months being boyfriends. He proposed me marriage and of course, I said him “YES”. I was so happy. But the months passed and I was looking how he, his attitude, his form of being was. However, I realized that he is layabout and he hit me. So, I decided divorced me”.
Nowadays Nina does not have husband, but she does not think have. Currently, she is doing conferences for girls and boys about her story. She wants that other people do not have her obsession.
THE LEGEND OF ALICE
ReplyDeleteThis story starts a cold autumn morning, when Alice was really happy. She was a beautiful and lovely woman. She believed in true love, as she never had felt so happy for having the perfect company next to her. That morning, she woke up imagining that his day would end as well as each one of the previous five years. A normal day for a devastating night, which, by reason of infidelity, shemurdered his only love. With tears in his eyes and running desperately to any place, she found a small abandoned building. He climbed up to the top floor. From there, she saw the city in the midst of the darkness of the night. Love did not exist for her. Hate invaded her heart and she lost hope. His death came that night after she fell to the ground, but her soul does not rest.
The legend says that every man who walks by that building, will find her in the top floor looking for her true love among people. There have been many men who want to save that person who is apparently on the verge of death, but they only get to be another victim. Alice looks sad and desperate. She needs to be helped, everyone thinks that. No one is able to console her, so her hatred grows. She ends up murdering all those who wanted to help her soul in pain.
Alice will never find her soulmate because her soul is lost in time and pain.
Sad Reality
ReplyDeleteIt was a cold day and the loneliness was the only company of a young lover of the life has lost his great love his life became in bitterness and unhappiness. Joseph was a young man who thought that his whole life would be with the girl that he had loved intensely for several years until a misfortunate separeted them . Mary suffered a fatal accident that caused her death. Since this moment Joseph decided to travel around the country trying to understand why he had lost his great love of cruel way. In one of his trips he casually met a beautiful woman who sat next to him, she was a woman with brown skin, light eyes and a charming smile that only a small look stole his heart.
Joseph began making some strange questions, Michelle very suspicious would answer an occasional question doing understand that she had no interest in him; the trip was eternal for her as Joseph became increasingly intense. Michelle arrived at her destination goodbye indifferently. Such was the interest of Joseph to know more about that girl he made a call as they had exchanged phone numbers.
Days passed and Joseph was beginning to feel things for Michelle, he realized that the woman reminded him moments that he had lived a few years ago; she had similar traits and attitudes like his beloved love. Joseph had been calling Michelle but she did not answer. Until one day she answers making clear that she was a woman who was engaged to be married Upon receiving the call she was very nervous because was with her husband and did not want that call was a misunderstanding.
Sad Joseph continues trying to win over the nice Michelle sending chocolates, cards and beautiful bouquets, knowing that was favorite details for her. It was so much interest to conquer her that Joseph knew where she lived and he went to look. Arriving at the house he realized that Michelle has a beautiful family and they were very happy. This was disappointing for him. Now Joseph travels frequently in search of new love, repeating the story again.
This is the story of a woman who might have had a wrong idea about what is the meaning of love or company. For that reason she tends to look for love in a bad way and clearly she is not happy. Is a bad way because she tries to find love when someone else feels sorry for her and thus she always will hurt herself.
ReplyDeleteI think that she was battered; maybe her attitude is because someone hurt her in the past and this is the result. She is an insecure person and needs to find comfort in someone to feel to safe. She wants to feel loved and tries it over and over again, even when her way of acting does not work. In relation with the man, I can see that is a good man. He was interested for the woman, even without knowing and this shows us what he did it without expecting anything in return. On the other hand, he is desperate because of the behavior of the woman. She is too intense but even so, he is very aggressive in consequence of the acts of the woman.
Love is something that you cannot find in whenever or anybody. Sometimes people think that happiness is next to another person, but it is totally false. Happiness must always be within each person. We have to be independent people; our emotional stability cannot depend on anyone else, just of ourselves.
When everybody understands it, we will be really happy.
BEAUTY LOVE
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, there was a beautiful girl, her name was Elizabeth. She was the most lovely and beautiful lady of Cherry Valley. She has a long red cherry hair, big blue eyes and also a perfect body. Her beauty was unique therefore the reason of jealousy of all maidens of the Valley. Eliza was about to turn 21 and all young men in town made long lines outside his house to try to conquer her. She used to be very vain and loved to receive this kind of attention, every man was willing to do whatever it took to win her heart but she used her beauty to play with their feelings.
Then one autumn morning a fairy called Lori heard of such extraordinary beauty with cold heart and decided to give her a lesson, her beauty would turn into her greatest curse henceforth men would be blind to it and she would only reflect her heart, making her looks ugly and despicable so she could never find true love. Days passed and Eliza didn't receive more visitors. One morning she decided to go for a walk around town to find out what had happened, and realized walking than she could not get attention from boys. Eliza puzzled by indifference, climbed the highest mountain in the valley decided to end this nightmare because for her nothing made sense if it was not admired and loved.
When she was about to jump, a plebeian saw her and climbed the mountain to try to save her. Seeing that someone finally took notice of her, she jumped into his arms thinking that this would be his last chance to be loved but after saving her, the young man offered her something to drink and kept going. But she was not about to let it go, so she went after him but all he did was despise her. Again with heartbroken and sad, ran to the mountains and since that day she waits on the high looking for her true love.
Love?
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a woman called Rachel. She was very beautiful. She was tall and thin. Also, she had green eyes and brown hair. Besides, she was very cunning. She used to hurt men’s feelings in order to play the martyr later.
She was always ready to use her tactics in order to find her ‘True love’.Some times, she threw things from the room outside, so, men would help her but other times, she said that she wanted to jump into void in order to kill herself.
One day, she threw a shoe when she saw that a handsome man got close, his name was Andrew. Really, he was very handsome. When he saw the shoe, he picked it up and went to help her. Then, he gave the shoe to her. Rachel gave him a hug and her eyes sparkled but he only smiled and continued his way.
However, she started to follow him everywhere. Andrew felt a little uncomfortable. Rachel showed up everywhere and made Andrew look ridiculous because she started to tell him many things in relation to love. According to Rachel, she was really in love with him but she didn’t want to understand Andrew had only been kind to her.She tried to make many things in order to win Andrew's heart. Really, she seemed to be obsessed with him.
One day, Andrew was still tired of her acts. Then, he decided to confront her in order to tell her what he thought about her situation. He said to her ‘You are very annoying’ ‘Stop to follow me!’ ‘Leave me alone!’
When she realized Andrew hated her, she went far away and started to do the same with other men. She always said ‘This time, I have found my great love’. Rachel finished her life being an obsessed woman with men. Maybe, if Rachel had thought better the things, everything had been different.
Ophelia
ReplyDeleteOn the building’s top Ophelia was looking the people who walked on the streets. The rough winds blew through her arms and she could feel that sensantion of freedom that experimented all the people who are nearly to die. But, that day she did not think of leaving the world, although it was an recurrent idea since Dante abandoned her in a ugly hotel two weeks before.
Dante was the greatest love of Ophelia and as her lover, he made her suffering too much, because he knew very well women only love all the things who give them deep pain, for this reason he left her in each opportunity he could and, for anything; for he was sure she cried, called and even knelt until they met again.
However, Ophelia was really injured this time because of Dante went out from the hotel in company of the a blond girl that he met into the bar the night before. And She could withstand any Dante’s childish, any bad treat… anything. Except for the Dante’s betrayal, especially with a woman was not half to woman she was.
So she had decided this occasion that she was not going to be in search of Dante, the rancor and the sadness had taken her heart and, then she had another plan. She wanted to pay the bad with bad and do to Dante the same thing. So the last days she was trying to get a man for what she could accomplish her vengeance or unless she wanted…
UNEXPECTED SITUATION
ReplyDeleteIt was an afternoon of January, when the strong and enraged Winter lashed the cold citys streets, this city with thousands of crossroads, so seem to hell without exit, that caths and imprisons in its loneliness, ¡that dark and chilling loneliness!, that afflicts only to those that allow that it can do; so, was when charles covering himself with his fur coat, walking alone and going to the supermarket somewhat pensive, the expression on his face get becoming distracted, as if he had any concerns that stalk your peace; then, the image in his mind of his young daughter,that only was 4 years old and his wife with 23 years old, and that in all his life he only there was got be interested in their welfare, for that, he was going to spend the little money that still be left in some food for the week, while he could reestablish his life, because of a few weeks ago, he had lost his job, which he had kept for almost 10 years, as well as to his 27 years old he only knew of masonry and construction; well, he came from a poor family and he did not had the possibility of getting some training for ready himself in some other profession.
however, did not lose the hope that they will soon get a job, without paying attention to what it was about, his priority was can find it, then he directing his gaze to a notice placed in a window reporting a job, then, he decided risking but when he got going into the office, he felt a great shock to find a lady with aspect unkempt, that to see him react quickly wiping her eyes, her voice shaking and off, invited him to continue to have a brief chat with her boss, then after that charles got explain his concerns, the hot man agreed to give him the job , at that moment charles got feel as f a cold breather across most of his body, then with great joy and with great gratitude he left there.
the next day, with great enthusiasm and willingness charles arrived at his new job, but again found the hindered woman,so his curiousity was getting woke up more and more, on that account this he wanted to invite to strange woman to take a coffee with him, but when he goes there is not anybody there, then he thought that it would be in a next time, then, at that moment he went to a nearby restaurant to have lunch, so when he was walking for the street he was surprised to see the woman on a pedestrian bridges edge, then increasing his desperation, grown to 100% with great speed he was going towards her, when he was near he request her that thought in any reason that would allow her to stay alive, but she with great sadness whispered " the truth i do not have any motivation because I was abandoned by my family when I was still very young and I have had that fight hard to be here today, in addition, the man who i have believed so perfect turned out to be a deceitful, then now there is not anything that worth staying alive, however after a long talk he achieves to convince her, after this he thought that maybe he has made an act of charity, but from that time the woman every day got be worried about giving a present and go to eat with him; however, charles thought at first that she only make it how a sign of gratitude, but the situation was get to be complicated and it was causing problems to his marriage, because of this charles tried of away from her and althouh he explain his situation many times the numbing women was not paying attention to this, it was as if she had found in charles the reason to continue, but the only idea was absurd, then the situation was getting so heavy, for this charles does not have another choice that leave her job and go away with family where the woman and anybody could find them and start your life again.
Is there any difference between love and whim?
ReplyDeleteFeelings are more capricious than whim by itself. They are as instinctive and irreverent as the wild animals; and once all together and accomplice by themselves, let printed in nature an innocent and genuine stamp of affection that infects to any living being of living it.
There is a woman who starts to draw with petal of roses a heart around of a tree. While she finishes her chore, one couple appears playing to chase after each other, and without they realize, their game stops caught in the drawn heart; and the tree is that accomplice innocent that helps to unite them in a romantic scene.
They stop their game when they are closed enough, the man doesn't resist and tries to kiss her. But the woman avoids the kiss and decides to let a red stain in the man's cheek. After that, they take up againg the chase's game and...
It will be continued...
Good Day!!
ReplyDeleteA CLASSIC STORY OF LOVE OR A TERRIBLE OBSESSION
Alisson is a young girl, she is 19 years old, but she is a person who always is sad, lonely and melancholy, this is because their mother died in a tragicaccident in the city of Cali, Colombia. Her father and she might survive. This happened 8 years ago. Since, that terrible November 22, the life of this intelligent and joyful girl change completely.
Currently, she is in College in her last grade, she now is unhappy and irresponsible with her tasks and family obligations. Also, is deeply in love of Kevin, a very cute guy he is studying in the same school that her, but he has a beautiful girlfriend. And they are very happy. However Alisson does not lose her expectations and every day, she calls him and she send to him many letters and gifts with the classmates.
One day Kevin was tired of theAlisson´s intensity, he decided to talk to her and demand that never more harass, the worst is that he told her that she was a person obsessive, nasty and strange. She was felt stronger very bad , then she decided that the better was commit suicide then, she climbed to a high building, but she is scared and only threw his shoe at the precipice. A young man was passing by this place and ran quickly to help her. Then, she began to flirt with him, she thought that this man was his obsession “Kevin” so she decided to pursue him for all the streets of this beautiful city, the capital of the salsa. :D
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ReplyDeleteThe last sigh.
ReplyDeleteEvery Day at morning she used to gets up early to look for another lover, she remember every second that his dear had leave her forever. Once she be eager for having in hers hands a man who to be able of give her the life that she has been since now. Every day she is climbing stairs to 3th foor of the café and to be able of remember the opportunity when they meet. When she arrives there, she takes her shoes and fall dawn it. She always hopes that the man who receives it maybe could be her real lover. On Friday she has found a man who helps her to keep on her life. But unfortunately she does not know that he is married, so as previously time she wants to come back to the 3th floor. She cries all the night, but next day at morning she meets a younger man who pledges her that she does not cry again . But one more time, he betrays the confidence of her the woman who believe that the love can be find in the streets. Maybe she just want to achieve her goal, could be felt the same love and peace that her lover had produced in her bowels before, she must not miss him a lot because she is the responsible of his starting, because when their were together she always had ignored him and also they used to fight at night. These are life’s injuries. One time again she goes to the 3th floor and she can notice that all is different, the sun, the airflow, the environment. Because this morning she is ready to jump, she does not want a life without him. So she walks slower and confident And she takes the last sigh and jump as any suicide before, but some strangest thinks are coming, and when the time to death is ready she wakes up in her normal room and whit her lover.
The life gives her a new opportunity to build up a new style of life whit her husband, from that moment she learns that the time is now, and that we have to enjoy every single second with the people that we love.
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